Good effort, but...
I liked the animation and the style of the movie, but think it could have benefited from smooth transitions and sounds instead of text words and clicking. Work on the sounds and this movie could be great!
Reviews for "JR. ALBATROS!!!"
not bad
I agree with the others, this definitely needs some sound (like music) to help give it more life. It's alright for a superhero story, just that it was pretty straightforward. Nice effort.
NEEDS SOUND
Your animation was pretty good, but you need to thicken the story plot and have SOUND!
It's not so bad when you supply your own music.
I watched it with my own music. And it was actually half decent. I have a suggestion for you. Try including the "Tangarine" tune from Earthworm Jim 2. It seems to fit mysteriously.
Check spelling and grammar first...
Albatross, not Albatros. also, you made a few glaring grammatical errors. Other than that, it was semi-decent.