Hmm
Well, I liked the original, without the trance part better. I think that part was unnecessary and sort of ruined the song for me.
But anyways, I liked the synths a lot. Definitely had the trance sound. The second one was a bit weird but fits I guess.
I liked the tempo change and breakdown in there. But daamn man. Where were those drums. Your like egging us on, then disappointing us.
Boom tiss boom tiss boom tiss cheecheecheehceecheecheecehee chssoooo...
Needs some work but still seems promising to me.
-SineRider