Cool
Great work, shoulder lookks like its snapped out of place, boobs could be bigger (Ye im shallow, wont mark you down for that though), panties should be lower down, no zip on trousers looks as if shes split em and bellybutton looks a bit worng but other than that, great, love the sun effects and the background, and the little plant on the left
Cool!
Just take this freaking 10 and keep making art like this, ya talented bastard!
I think I see-
the problem. Everyone is wondering whats up with the left shoulder. I'm questioning though whether it's the right shoulder thats the real culprit. More specifically the TOP of the right shoulder. It swells a bit in the trapezius, and it kind of makes it look a bit hunched; throwing off the line the left shoulder and collar bone creates. Bringing the shoulder line on the left arm up slightly instead of curving it sharply into the hair might also work wonders as well.
I'm not a artist though and I very easily could have no idea what I'm talking about. XD
~Sky
Nice and awesome....
the shoulder....
Canvasss...
We have the same style in drawing about this one. The sketch, color, and lighting are like the same...
the shoulder: you must adjust it, the right side is a little bit long...
the body: good (try adding smoothness to the slope
the face: make a better facial expression
Overall: 9.7 :D