Pretty good! maybe improve on the grammar a little bit, that would make it better! and maybe make it a bit more similar to the actual game? maybe have him say beep boops just have it like this for example; "Beep Boop Skibidy bop (then what ever he says here)" Like that!
Thats all i think you could improve at, and maybe get some tutorials about better ways to draw bonnie? NOW thats all!