Be sure not to make a preloader...
And how about... building up some drawing skills? This was just terrible... 1/5
Reviews for "Yoshi rebels!"
Yoshi-lord responds:
It was my FIRST, I will on my next one, as long as you belive me.
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First: Blamming isn't prohibited. What Tom meant when he said that earlier was only referring to people who vote zero on all movies, regardless of how good they are. (btw, if blamming was prohibited, why would Tom and Wade even have created the blamming system in the first place? So they could waste their time? Your lack of intelligence in this area just amazes me)
Second: Don't start bitching with the "You haven't made any flashes. What do you know?" bit. I personally work with flash a lot, and yes, it can be hard. I, personally, am gonna wait until I can make a really good flash before I submit anything like you're submitting. There are a ton of site tutorials that can help you with your skills. At least learn how to make a button BEFORE you start submitting things to Newgrounds. And just because someone doesn't make flash, doesn't mean they don't know crap when they see it. Just because you can throw some crap together and somehow not get it blammed doesn't make you a god.
Anyway, I could go on forever about this. So I'll just end with a summary. If you take to account your lack of experience (Which you should've gotten before submitting anything. But that's only my opinion) as well as your amount of ignorance (ignorance is usually a personality trait more than anything, I'm afraid) and your luck (this not getting blammed), then I'd say you could become a lot better if you got some skills, and get much better ideas (a super saiyan gumba? I mean...c'mon)
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ive never made a flash before but i bet you worked hard on it. dude the timing on the reading part sucked it goes by way to fast and some others ive seen i can read just fine. next time you make a flash with reading, read it to yourself and see how long it takes and probably add a second or two so that way your readers will stay entertained, i once did that with a powerpoint project. also, the graphics were crap, if you cannot draw that good then go download an emulator and a rom and take pictures from there, you can make the pictures any size you want and it might even look a little professional, or at least not to where it looks like 5 year old did it even if it was your first one.
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how old r u??? its like if u done this with paint shop or adope photoshop.....
MAKE A SPRITE MOVIE!
That was shite,but you should try making a sprite movie...