Starts promising
But why is that red thing in the picture when he looks at his plan? Plus, there are two songs playing at the same time when that happens. What's your problem anyway? If it's this, all you got to do is to delete the frames you used for this purpose. I doubt you don't know how to do this, considering the quality of the animation in the rest of the short.
OMFg, read the Author's comments
sort of short
I understand that you had some problems when you made this, so in light of that its not so bad. Its too short though, its only the beginning of a story, but I would like to see the next episode
What the?!
I watched it 2times over and still dont get the point. if it wasent for the good graphics, I would've given you a 2. [But the star wars helped boost the points too :)]