Good work and good luck
This is my favorite entry I think. Its just so catchy and diverse.
I like the strings throughout the piece and you got it to loop very well.
The strange drum sounds are awesome. I especially like the sound you got using what sounds like a bp filter on a snare. Some really great sounds in this one drumwise.
And the synths... shit, they're bad. The good kind of bad. See I worked my ass off on my submissions but I think raw musical talent has come up with something much better (not to imply you didn't put an effort through). We'll see when the results come in, but I wouldn't mind losing to this loop.
What else can I say? Well I already sort of mentioned you have a really catchy melody. Melody is one of the things many submissions lacked. The mixtures of sounds supporting the melody killed altogether.
I don't know if it makes a difference but the thing one thing that didn't work out for you, if I'm not mistaken, is that you had this under the battle category. This one would sound much better while cruising the halls of Pico school in the slower moments, if you know what I mean. I don't think it will effect your chances though cause I don't know how the judging works. So anyways, good luck to you! Keep the good ones rollin'.
-HybrosHybrood