Te second part of this rocked!!
The beginning was too slow and wasn't too interesting, but once you got past the bird and into the army of the People-Things this was very funny! I'd lose that whole beginning sequence (it's so disconnected it's like a separate cartoon anyway) and just make this about the People-Things going off to war. The "extra feature" was just a one-off joke...unnecessary but okay I suppose...but those People-Things cracked me up.