sucercide, it's a sucercide
nice poem..i guess
Reviews for "A poem----Youth Sucercide"
I'd kill myself if this was my spelling
Yeah, suicide sucks, but poor spelling sucks even more. Whatever meaning this was supposed to have I think I missed because I was laughing to hard about the spelling. And since that all this entry has to it is text, that has to say something about the overall effort put into this piece.
Sucker-cide?
This one got off to (sorry, 'two'...) a bad start because it looked like a joke. The atrocious spelling could have been tolerated on a heavily graphics-based Flash movie, but not on one where the text was its main feature. I'll never figure out how suicide could have the letters 'sucer' in it, but it looked too much like 'sucker' which made me laugh for a start. I can see what the author was trying to do, but it just didn't work. Anyway, I won't kill myself as long as the portal doesn't get filled with too many entries like this... Deal? Please?!
Hmmmm
well you certainly can't spell but you can always work on that
Hmmmm
Yeah that may be true but I think we all know the story. I'd say 1 out of 5 people has tried to commit suicide. Oh yeah it's "to" not "two" you non spelling bastard. LOL (j/k)