The animation is good, but you need to improve your camera angles.
Reviews for "Emily's Excellence."
MsLewd responds:
yup
the jump cuts are really annoying
MsLewd responds:
Yessir you already kno!!
First the good then the meh, the character design and general animation is good, I like the proportions and I like that the bounce of the breasts and ass etc. are not over exaggerated like some people do. the scenes, positions and angles are sexy and thought through.
as for what I'm not fond of, turn down the saturation, add some contrast so your work can be properly seen. I can't watch this without a headache because it's too bright and white. Your scene transitions could use some polishing and ease up on the jump cuts back and forth, let one loop for a while, go to the next, it's easier to appreciate your hard work and effort that way.
To be honest I think this great animation was ruined by a fog effect that makes it so hard to watch. It's like they are in a sand storm. The animations were good, the penetrations were clear, nice physics, hot angles. But ruined by a fog filter. Really don't know how that even came about as an idea.
Other than that, like the previous person said it's a bit annoying to have scenes switch so quickly. And I'll also add to it that, that "unfocused" effect you add only makes things worse, this ain't art, we want to see what we watch.
ok.....
MsLewd responds:
ye....