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Reviews for "Jayden Fun time"
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love it! But I don't really see why would you make it with Adobe Flash, which will become obsolete soon and we won't be able to play it anymore in a few days
shinlalala responds:
Well, cause I don't know any other software well enough for doing this haha.
But I might either get into HTML5 export from Animate or just using stuff like Game Maker.
cute
Nicely done, but really feels lacking in the sound department. Maybe a voice or some sort of calm music could do it justice.
I like that the background is simple as heck, it's easier on the eyes, but a little separator between the two colors would give it some volume, and so give the character a more natural position.
The character itself looks pretty good, nothing to complain about, I especially lack the absence of separation between the hairs and the ears.
Finally, the UI. The two arrows look kinda weird. For some reason it looks more like an "up right" and a "down left" arrow than a right and left one. I *think* it has to do with their position.
I'm saying a lot of bad point, but that's because I'm really appreciative of the work behind: I like what I see, and you have a lot of potention, but I'd love to see it perfected.
shinlalala responds:
Thank you for the in depth feedback.
I'll try to improve everything on my next animation.
For voice, I just need a better mic haha. For music, tbh, I can't compose music, so I'll probably ask a friend or something.
I'd like to make fully drawn background next time, but that's my weakness in drawing.
Also yeah, the pose might be a bit weird haha, I'll try to take references next time.
The UI is a bit weird now that you say it. I'll try to make something more clear next time. Maybe a very clear arrow instead of a triangle.
Also thanks, I'm happy people appreciate Jayden's design. :3