Just take your time!
Seriously, I think if you would have just taken your time on this project it would have been a lot better. It sounded like all you did was use the computer voice for the main character. I could see you were trying to be funny with the three pizza shops right next to each other but if they would have looked different from each other with detail it would have been better. Just be patient and you will have a good flash!
god, dude
that was not good at all, your people looked like walking crap, the voices sounded talking crap, and you really need to work on keeping walking people's shoulders connected to the rest of their bodies. either improve or quit.
uhh...
Umm.. the grapics were good, the audio needs work, and well, just work harder. If your gonna make it violent, make it violent, not 'uhh.. i'ma cut your arm off and thats it..'.
stupid
fucking wierd no point
I know this guy!
this movie kind of sucks, but i know the guy who made it(goes to same school)! i'm special! and i'm workin on my own flash movie now!