Wow, this blew my mind! Specially the intro, I think I never seen a mix of real movie , flash animation and rpg maker before! The pacing was great, as well the dialogues and art. It really looked liked a polished game!
One complain: For some odd reason, in my computer (maybe because of Linux) it sometimes kept separate screens, like the "clean" scene was in corner, and the effects were on the left, and sometimes a third screen, cropped in the middle, was in the center.