Suck-filled ball of suck while it sucked suckheads
I'm sorry but your art is too ugly to look at...
The bodies are horrible, because you figured that if you draw the body once and it looks "ok" you don't have to draw it again in different poses.
The eyes... They are fucking pills that shoot your ugly character's heads up... Why did you DO that!? I thought it was common sense that people do not stand facing forward while looking diagonally to the right!!
Now, the jokes were okay... Wait! NO they WEREN'T!
Cliche at the end is funny when people DID it ORIGINALLY many years ago, but just don't try to be cool if you suck at it.