5/1/24 - please ignore the part where I talk about "the disaster of the review" i was being an asshole :/
Ignore the disaster of a review below, as it does work, he probably just doesn't have NG player. And I'm surprised he'd say that when a game he made literally pulled to a white screen, no joke. It's an OK game, so I'll say some things I liked and things I ha- I mean, you can improve on.
- ART -
The art is pretty good. Not the best, but I'd presume you may be a beginner at flash, so it's great for beginners. If your not a beginner than...uhh...
- ORIGINALITY -
Ok this is where things begin to fall. Obviously it's a RS fangame, but here's the problems with originality. The puzzles and jokes are very similar, which kind of angers me, since nothing gets me than copied lazy writing rather than your own creativity.
- PUZZLES -
The puzzles are pretty easy to figure out, but once again, this probably was one of your first flash attempts, so I may excuse that. For future puzzles if you make future games, a suggestion is to make an easy puzzle and think of how you can amplify it. I'll also have to say like RS1, there's lots of empty useless rooms. Another tip is to think of what puzzle could fit in a room.
- DIALOUGE -
This is a section about dialogue. < That's NOT how to do dialogue, but somehow 55% of the game's text is that. You should add puns, funny stuff, crap jokes, inside jokes, any jokes! This was an issue I found with School Run as well.
- QUALITY -
No, this isn't art all over again. This one will go over how the game works and functions. To begin off, whilst most of the coding is good, I found some weird glitches.
Glitch 1: If you click the 3rd most lockers after getting the cookie, your transported into the cafeteria.
Glitch 2: Even after you give the cookie, you can re-enter the room and will be faced with it again. However, since the cookie is no longer in the inventory, you get stuck.
Glitch 3: Whilst this is minor, you can notice the crack in the floor spaz out once you get the cookie.
Along with that, I noticed some smelling mistakes of misleading things. You'd think you'd need a hall pass to get pass the kid, but you don't, so why even put that?
- OVERALL -
Once again, it's ok overall, and if it's a beginners game, its pretty impressive. But please, take my complaints with a pinch of salt and improve your next game if you do so.
P.S. You forgor to credit Jon.