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I like the wah wah guitar you have in here..., but it gets a little too disorted and crushed after a while.
the drums sound good, but a lil badly filtered- I like the change int oa more silent piano part- a little harsh but really fascinating
pretty good stuff man
Hah, thanks man.
ROCKET THEISM
fucking awesome guitar! thats such a good patch. do you use an interface ? oh, it just got to piano. love that too. this is an inspiring song. mkes me want to write something. check my stuff out if you want man, and im not shamelessly plugging your page haha.
Cool...
You've got your first reviewer that's not me! Congratulations. :P Now you just need to get people to review your songs with more than one-liners... :D
So you made an Industrial song? Hmm. I made one of those too, recently... I'd like to see what you did.
Starting with low notes... and now you come in with some surprisingly realistic drums. Guitar, too... this, I guess, is sounding pretty industrial.
Your melody is low, varied, and consistent, and the choice for the guitar, and the choice of having one to begin with, were both good ones. Nothing to add here.
Hmm, quiet piano-ish break. It fits surprisingly well and adds new atmosphere to the song... you then change everything else to fit it and then slowly make a smooth transition back to the original, low guitar mode. Nice... :)
There aren't really any harmonies unless you count that bass that was there from the beginning. Which is, by the way, too low and the biggest fault of the song - in my opinion it should have been either an octave higher or only in the beginning of the song.
The percussion is great - your choice of realistic drums adds a lot to the industrial feeling. I especially like that reeverbed snare drum... they do get a bit boring, though. You could have changed things up a bit as the guitar progressed in the foreground.
Again, I don't quite get your choice in titles, but not as badly as last time. And, again, I can see this in a professional video game.
You know... you have the potential to be very popular on NG... problem is you're not trying to get that publicity! How will people know how good your stuff is if you don't advertise yourself? And I don't mean creating spam threads on the BBS, of course... write reviews for people! They don't have to be long like mine are... they just have to be decent, offering at least a little positive criticism if you want them to be motivated to look at your audio. (Offering the URL to your audio page helps, too. :) )
So... here's basically how you should do it: Any chance you could stop by my audio page at http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1828837 sometime? A review for some of my latest would be appreciated... thanks a lot, and keep up the good work. :)
(And I mean that! I was giving an example and asking you to visit my audio page at the same time. :D Much appreciated.)
Haha, hey man, I'm pushing 30 reviews here. Yah you're right I do need to get more active, I'm working on it. Thanks for the reviews and constructive criticism, helps a lot.
You've got potential
The song has body, but it doesn't seem like a full producer version, more like a Work-in-progress.
You've got a lot of potential for this song, as it's got enough to be a full song, but it needs more to give it that spark. You need similar channels that sync in well with everything, so that it fits in, like the last pieces to a puzzle. Great work on it altogether though. :D
Check out my stuff! http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1745889&sub=676
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very cool
I actually like the guitar sound you used, maybe even better than the real thing. The drums are nice and slow; quite groovy indeed. Not sure about the rhodes though... either way, good stuff.