It was ok
Too short, you have good ideas
It was ok
Too short, you have good ideas
Only one suggestion...
When the monster grabs the dad, you should have him scream in terror, for he is scared.
First entry...
well... for a first submission to newgrounds it's not too bad I guess... I think you'll be able to rise to the expectations most of these portal junkies have before too long.
Hope ya don't get blammed. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll do pretty good.
Hehehehe.....
Funny movie...It was a little short.Make longer animations and you could even get into the front page if you put some effort on it...
((( ABIT FUNNY )))
Ok well it was abit funny, just so very very short, the audio was just way to low to hear much, not bad though...
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