love the chords and melodies so much! mixing needs a bit of work though. look into using sidechain compression, and it definitely needs a sub. the chords were a bit too stereo and the leveling isnt the greatest. lota promise though!
Reviews for "EspiDev - Parfait [Kawaii Future Bass]"
Pretty cool
Actually enjoyed this one quite a bit, especially the chord progression. Loving the squeaky toy sounds!
That said, few criticisms:
-The sound effects need a bit more thought in how you add them in— If the musical portion is too sparse they can be really jarring rather than contributive. (This especially goes for the "yeah!" it seriously startled me a few times haha)
-Speaking of sparsity, tonal elements seemed to spontaneously drop in and out without warning. Chords would leap onstage, say something short, and then leap off, leaving me all alone with the ambient sounds effects and the percussion. Don't do that to me! I get lonely easily :(
-Also, the kick could stand to be louder. Like, 5 times louder. Plus some more sidechaining might be nice.
-The piano is suuuuuuper dry. Don't be afraid to turn up that reverb! It gives your sounds a lot more body, especially acoustic ones.
So on the whole, a cool track with a lot of potential that had some basic mixing and arrangement issues. Should be easy enough to improve in future pieces.
Cool work!
I love the melodies and the chord progressions, they are amazing! However, the song feels a bit empty in some places, like at 0:19. Also, I feel like the bass could have been stronger in some places. Overall, a fun and good song. ;)
i hate copyrighted songs would like it better if it was copyright free
EspiDev responds:
this song is not copyrighted... it's under creative commons