Complementary music and clean transitions for a grand intro, excellent character models and beautiful background design, stupendous sound effects, impressive physics, awesome voice acting. The action scenes were really cool. I loved seeing them implemented. The camera really added to the emotions of the scene. "Resis"? (It's in the run scene) I'm going to give you the benefit of the doubt and assume that was a spell... The automatic text scroll was interesting.
Alright, the story seems intriguing with minor errors in the text. Fantastic work! I'm excited for the next chapter!