MORE BASS!
I feel like there could be a heveier bass in the song...
i turned my volume up all the way and could not feel it like i would like
but still nuff respect to ya. =D
im gonna start taking music tech in the fall. and learn how to do that
keep it up
Lol yeah I tried that myself too now and I see what you mean. The bassline lacks in power and has too much treble and too little bass.
Good luck then! All it takes is some inspiration and knowlegde of the music and you're set!!
Thanks, you keep it up too!
good
its not the best but good
Not the best? But you still gave a 10? How generous! =)
But yeah, some instruments are poorly picked and the bass lacks in power but what the heck.. I guess the melodies were the main focus. :P
I will make more, and better!! =)
Respect.
This sounds awesome. I have downloaded this song to my iTunes. It starts off a bit slow, but really gets that beat once it gets through.
I'm really glad you liked it!
Thanks very much, I will create more!! =)
Awesomeness
Your kick is very nice... but I think it takes to long to get into it. and your Melody effects kinda sound the same with all your songs... but yet it is very nicely set out... you should check my stuff out, You might like it.
Prometheos Out
Yes, most people around when I make music tells me that I should always try to take the sound a step further and that it too often sounds the same.
With alot of small tones of high-pitched square sounds and stuff like that.
About the kick.. I mostly make psy/goa instead of club/"normal"-trance, and I tried to choose a kick that would fit the song. If it sounds weird or if it's out of place sometimes, I won't be surprised since I'm not too familiar with all genres of trance.
You can never know too much of hows are "supposed" to sound!
Thank you very much for your review, for being honest and also for liking it! =)
I WILL submit more and more to this site, be sure about that! I will also check your stuff out, of course!
Take care! /Spiriax
Interesting....
Nice intro! Has a oceanic feel to it, and the bass....way to loud at first...try to build the bass slowly during the song.
I agree with the other dude...the bass is way too low and the treble...well...is a wee bit to high.
The name of the song doesn't suit or fit the song itself...change the name to something like (The Rise of The Storm)
Keep working on it and you might get famous like Dimrain47 and BOUNC3.
Signed by your friend, IGPX
Thanks!
I wanted to put some strings in it and since it sounded very oceanic, the name for the song was chosen. It might not have been the best name though, you're right. And if I wanted it to have any "water-ish" in the name, it could've been "Rise of the Tidal Wave" or something. =P
Although "Rise of the... " and names like that might not be the most original. But the song name was wrong nevertheless, I realize that.
Yes, the kick and bass may be out of place a bit, and I've got some issues about mastering and how stuff are supposed to sound. But I mostly make goa/psy and stuff like that, and I wanted this to be a little different so if things are out of place I won't be surprised. (Maybe that's just too much of an excuse. >_<)
When I play the song I think personally that there's nothing wrong with the bass or kick but we all have different experiences and tastes, although I know something came out wrong since you both guys told me. =)
Yes, I will definitely! I want people to use my stuff in their flashes! So I will keep submitting until someone does that!
Thank you so much for your review and for the criticism! You can never progress further without criticism. 8)
See ya!
/ Spiriax