great
It was really good but some of the writing went way too fast so you should add buttons
Reviews for "Defective"
Very nice
It could have used some closure, but this was a very good fic. Very good blend of plot, and decent graphics and sound to boot! Keep up the good work :)
awesome work
awesome, just add pause buttons and rewind buttons and stuff since its so long, in case someone missed something or cant read fast enough
Wow
This flash author deserves everything that one can get in the world of NG. This person treats flash as a true art. Thank you.
GREAT!!!
If people have read the Giver and liked it, they will like this one too!