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Reviews for "Market Day (KindLing A0S1)"

I love your style! Your songs are very melodic and enjoyable to listen. In my opinion, you are starting to go into a style similar to 1f1n1ty's, where your songs are more than just songs, they are like a musical journey, with many different parts, like destinations, throughout. I'm really glad to see you trying out some new stuff. Keep up this amazing work! ;)

Miyolophone responds:

Thanks xXLocoXx! It might be kind of dangerous to try beating 1f1n1ty at his own game, since he's a competitor in the competition, but I'm doing my best c:

1f1n1ty.. You can't create fake accounts just to upload more music! lol JK you sound just like 1f1n1ty! This is really good! 9.8/10

Miyolophone responds:

Haha thanks! ^-^

I liked the pensive mood at the beginning, and the percussion was a nice touch. Good use of reverb and progression. The texture is rich and has a great sense of drive about it, even without much in the way of drums or bass. The sound design is really strong. I think the melodies at 1:12 are a little too loud, and it’s also easy to tell that the string sample there is fake because of it’s slow attack. Overall, the production quality here is really strong, and I liked the tempo automations at 1:50. The bell sound at 2:06 was a little harsh-sounding - you may want to take some treble off of it in an equalizer. Still, I appreciated the tranquility, which offered some great structural relief from the earlier energetic section. The texture changes drastically at 2:32 and again at 2:55 - the piece doesn’t have a ton of structural cohesion, so I’d be careful about trying to cram too many melodic ideas into one piece. That said, the piece comes together nicely with the return of the powerful string solos. Overall, the composition here is absolutely fantastic. The slight balance issues during the string sections were the only things that actively bothered me. Keep up the great work, Miyolophone! ;)

9.75/10

Miyolophone responds:

(ahhhhh the attack was all the way down stupid viola sample)
Thanks TL for the feedback and obscenely high score! Like I said to johnfn, I'll make sure to treat my melodies and textures with respect and dignity instead of just tossing them around next time ;)

Damn that part at 2:05 was so good. There's a lot that I can learn from your approach to your own music that would help me in mine. That subtle keydrop at 2:31 that is almost unnoticeable was a really nice touch too. The guitar could do with sounding a little more humanised. The velocity of the notes all seems a bit too even. The music box sample is really nice. The violin... viola??? could do with being a lot more humanised too. :) I love your composition style though. Something really special about your work.

Miyolophone responds:

Yeah, totally agree about the humanization on this one... I need to do some revisions but I keep forgetting. Glad you enjoyed though!

Dang dude, you made this sound really good. The violin and guitar sound pretty much real now, and the whole piece is composed really well.
Just one thing: I noticed something going on with the electronic bit (which is also WAY nicer to the ears now): there was some sort of echo after the note ends, where it kinda cuts off then comes back. It may just be a compression issue, but its distracting.
8/8 m8 would play again

btw when's once upon a time (better edition) coming out?

Miyolophone responds:

Oh, yeah, that was actually an intentional level automation + bitcrusher thing that I thought was aesthetically pleasing. Fair enough but I'm probably not going to change it honestly, glad the other changes worked though

april 1st?????