A master hand/chainchomp baddie!
It's nice to see the blue wonder in motion after having commented on her design earlier.
I think you as visual story teller have a great sense of scale, and pacing, and the only thing I could really ask is a drop or two of more detail because you draw a beutiful world.
I would have also loved to have seen more from such an interesting monster design, but I am very satisfied with what we got.
Thank you for making this.
Reviews for "Chaotic Heart: First Encounter"
9Hammer responds:
Thank you Putney! I can definitely enhance the details a bit more to help the background environments, and I appreciate the comment too!
Great animation
that much is obvious
i'd take off half a star cause I dont really find myself caring about the character or how the fight plays out, im just looking at the spectacle and saying "thats neat"
It's interesting to read the comments. Like many others, I struggle to give 5 stars but compared to other animations, this is actually really good given that it is only a rough animation. So take these comments as critique due to the high level of expectation (which should make you proud).
- The plot and background is indeed unknown and hence I do not care for a witch looking with evil eyes, no matter if he/she is good or bad. I must agree I find it strange to look at these two (female) characters fighting fiercly with rocky fists and electricity. Not because I would not like to see that but there is a lack of emotion. They both do not seem to care. If they both feel so overpowered, why bother at all? A rather good example which came to my mind for comparison: Second part of the divergent movies.
- The hand. Even with the choppy edges still feels like a rubber glove. Definitely needs more roughness, shaking and jittering and less - as much as you can have with a rubber glove - elegance.
- The hat. Comicy sidekick out of a childrens book. But I guess that is not important in this scene.
But, as said above, this is high level critique. The fight itself is intense and with a good choreograpy!
Astonishing, it truly is. I just got to know, how did her glasses stay on the whole time?
I don't know anything about Chaotic Heart. I do love this! The animation was absolutely amazing. Sentient hats are cool too. It seems like I've been seeing a lot of great stuff without dialogue lately. The action's great too.
The shading is simply fantastic. A lot happens in only two minutes. Congratulations on your Weekly 2nd Place! Wow, this is a long time to stay on the front page. How did I not notice this?