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Reviews for "NH22 - Sun & Moon"

Amazing - and could still use some work.

Well, I'm listening to this with one headphone since the other one won't work and I can't find my good headphones, which aren't really good at all, and I don't want to use speakers... >_< But I'll try to review this song as well as I can.

Again, you start out with that great style of yours. There's bad quality there, but I'm assuming that's my headphone problem. Great piano work there. There's a lot of emotion in this, great, great work!

You come out with some very neat arpeggios and synths, but you have lackluster percussion that you DEFINITELY need to put more effort into!

Your melody is great, and like in your other song you keep it fresh throughout the song, which does WONDERS for how good your song is. It does sound a bit random at times, however... but for the most part it's great! I especially like your synth choice, and the reeverbed synth that plays your melody at times. Great choice there!

Your harmonies add harmony to the song very nicely, and you're not in excess of them nor do you have too few. They do get a bit plain, and you could use a bit more variety in them. That bass is a bit annoying as well, and a bit TOO low... you could have made a better choice regarding that one.

Your percussion is weak and plays little of a part in this song. I can understand having weak percussion for this style of song, but at least (A) use samples that are at least SOMEWHAT original, and (B) find some creative rhythms! All I hear is a clap on the 2nd and 4th beat, and a closed hat playing 16th notes or quarter notes depending on the section.

Your key change, while sounding good, didn't need to happen in my opinion and if it REALLY had to happen, you should have added something that JUSTIFIED that key change! ;) What reason, other than a few different notes, would cause those masses to start raving harder? ;)

Again, you have that great rave style which many try to get and few succeed with, you being one of those few. However, you can still put even MORE effort into your songs! Don't just "settle" for anything, your song HAS to be what you 100% perfect if you want a 10 from me! =P

Still, you have a lot of talent. I don't want to see it go to waste through laziness - imagine if you put your all into your next song, how good it would be!! Keep trying, I hope all of my advice helps. =) Why don't you review my song Nova? It would be interesting to hear your opinion on it, even though it's a few weeks old. ;) Thanks, and keep up the good work! =)

Great stuff!

Good work! This song is very well done!

its awsome

cool is sun the bright sounding one and moon the dark and shaded one?it sounds awsome=3.

NightHawk22 responds:

yep, you got it!
thanks,
NightHawk22

This song is really, really good.

And I mean that. I have already downloaded it. I also thought of some lyrics to go with it. Great job.

Good Job

Excellent job man, keep up the good work, looking forward to some more