Sick build up
The opening pad needs to be compressed, it peaks too loud. Crazy ass effects leading into the bass part, its all centered in the middle though. Panning them from side to side would have made this more complete, but your still working on this, so doesnt matter.
The melody was alittle weak at the end. Maybe descending the pattern from the highest note would make it sound better. It would be more diverse at least. But i dunno, you seem to know what your trying to create
so good job