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Reviews for "After the Rain"

I love the melodies in this!

GL in the NGADM! :D

johnfn responds:

that's what we dooooooooooo =D

(do do do)

Ehh, I decided to take time to review this right now while I'm on a roll :D

As often, it's quite obvious that johnfn was working on this :')
That said, it's nice to have a clear cut style at times! I noticed you told Jordi to be more varied in his work, so if you make it to the next round, I challenge you to do something that's not electronic ;)

That said, I'm very happy you took this route for this round! Even with the glitch and the lead, there's enough that'd different about the style to make it super fresh! I'm sure this is because of your contributions, ethansight ;D

I love the voice, and all the rhythmic aspects. Really neat use of the chord hits o.O

The only thing I'd change, is I recommend making a more interesting ending. It by no means sounds bad! It's just a bit lackluster, since it sounds like a section that's just ending and about to lead to a new part. Maybe that's what you were going for for some reason though?

Either way. Cool track, and good luck!

johnfn responds:

yea still working on that ending. it was done in about 5 minutes at 11:50 PM. we still have time right? ;-)

also i would argue this is fairly outside of my chip tune comfort zone. yea sure its still electronic, but the chords and melodic style is pretty different than my standard fare

i would love to do non-electronic but i cant sing (yet) and i dont really want to do cinematic (sorry lol). tho ethansight can sing so HMMMM. we might do something more interesting next round =p

P.S. i tried different leads but they sound worse

P.P.S ethan and i have the exact same style oops

This doesn't get old-- been listening to this quite a bit while driving across states this weekend. This can almost be a crossover with it's r&b sound. Would've just like to hear some lyrics. That synth lead at 3:30 is just butter!

johnfn responds:

thanks phonom, congrats on your great score! =D

you can thank ethansight for that synth. he's such a balllerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

That melody!!! Marry me both of you plz <3.

johnfn responds:

the feeling is mutual, let's find a chapel!!!!!!!!!

(i was literally humming your song as i checked ng for notifications)

I freakin' love this.

johnfn responds:

thank you, evilgrapez! =D