why the switch from family to friends is my only question and issue, because honestly the fact of them being a family going into the shelter made a lot more sense then a bunch of friends. if you really want to avoid incest just have the MC be adopted that would work out and all you would have to do is add a bit in the intro part for the MC and return the old script, as i can point out a few odd parts as in the anger between Kira and the dad (whose name i forget) and the part where MC doesn't automatically assume that the dad is talking about the other shelter-mates when they converse about repopulation (unless the MC just really respects their friendship but considering how fast he jumps on the train i don't consider that likely). i would like to point out that i'm not hating and am trying to be constructive, i only say because i am A. paranoid, and B. have gotten flak for trying to be constructive before on another game.