Awesome. Very similar to stuff by pinktea, but there's nothing wrong with that.
edit: ah yeah. he's a part of this, apparently. didn't notice when i wrote this orignially.
Reviews for "My Unusual Feline Friend 1.0"
best 0.1 I have seen on here in ages!
I must say, I really enjoyed the game. One bug (I think it's a bug) I did find; is that, during the end of the day scene, along with a few other scenes, it displays the catgirl's name for the dialogue box when it is the human's thoughts/words that are being conveyed. I.e. it displays the catgirl's name when the text box says "And what an anazing creature just walked into my life..." Also there is a typo in that sentence: "anazing" should be "amazing".
Another typo is during the line "*And just as you think that very though...*" "though" should be "thought"
Another typo is during the line "One for literature, one for history, one of hairstyles." "one of hairstyles" should be "one for hairstyles
Another typo is during the line "I am from a different dimension where sex does does exist." "does does" should be "doesn't" or "does not"
Another typo is during the line "There must be some kind of sex where your from. Surely..." "your" should be "you're" or "you are"
Another typo is during the line "But we always use them in private, such as in bed or the shower." "in bed or the shower" should probably be "in the bed or shower" or "in bed or in the shower"
Another typo is during the line "*she chews down on a plump lower lip.*" "a plump lower lip*" should probably be "her plump lower lip*"
In the line "*Her eyes are rolled upwards as she finishes off gulping down the last of your seed.*" I think that the word "off" is out of place, and that the sentence works better without it
Another typo is during the line "What we did today...It was really...exihllerating..." "exihllerating" should be "exhilarating"
Another typo is during the line "Yeah, that porn .. um.. I mean research material belongs to my ...er consins...dog..." "consins" should be "cousin's"
Another typo is during the line "Yesturday was so interesting, I can't wait to see what other sex things there are." "Yesturday" should be "Yesterday"
Another typo is during the line "Your eyes are so beautiful. They'll give whoever you're blowing go crazy." "give" should be "make"
Another typo is during the line "*She cock her head to the side.*" "cock" should be "cocks"
In the line "Because you'd look cute as hell, and it'd feel real good." "it'd feel real good" is awkward. A better phrasing would be "it'd feel really good" or "it would feel really good". it works the way it is, but it is awkward grammar.
Another typo is during the line "*You keep massaging her pussy, her body starting to jerk in rhythm to your motions.*" "her body staring to jerk" should be "her body starts to jerk" or "with her body starting to jerk"
There is a grammar issue during the line "With you in my bed, trust me it's taking all my self-discipline not to take you right now." "bed, trust me it's taking all my" should be "bed, trust me, it's taking all of my"
Please note that I use American English, and consequently, there may be some differences with spelling and grammar when compared to British English.
Also, I can't help but see a resemblance to Pink Tea. Were you inspired by their games, perhaps?
All and all, great game, it is early in development, but it has a lot of potential. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
-Edit: I feel bad for commenting on so many typos, but I hope calling attention to specific ones help
pinkypads responds:
Thanks - I appreciate the help!
Asto why the game's similar Pinktea's is that I AM Pinktea. I'm collaborating with the artist ikemura hiroichi to make some new projects.
extremely good for the first go of it.