Reviews for My Girl [Beta] 0.1

[LordJames1337]

i knew something was up the moment the disclaimer said something out of the ordanary as this is one of those older porn games hell to the yes

Edeshye responds:

Thanks a lot!

[billnye123456]

weve all had that one girlfriend whose dad died in several unbelievable ways

Edeshye responds:

Lol! Thanks a lot for your review!

[GorgTD]

Bloody stellar keep going man

Edeshye responds:

Thanks a lot!

[Ballistic-Ink]

I typically make my reviews very detailed and constructive with advice...

This is weird and I like it-
That's as far as I got-
Pretty much, the game has no plot and I've noticed that clicking on either the scooby doo option or the poodle option just gives dialogue of her yelling at you about a poodle-

But it's...sort of so bad it's good...

Or rather-
It's so...self aware about itself that it's good-

This can almost be considered a parody for all the legitimately bad and underdeveloped hentai games on Newgrounds-

That being said, you have a great sense of humor and awareness, the art is good, if fairly simple, and I can see you actually making some amazing things in the future with more polish and practice for variety.

And dammit, I actually did make a completely serious review of this, WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME????-

Anyways, good comedy, good character design and animation, interested in what you'll make in the future-

This honestly deserves a higher score...and I think it probably would've gotten it if people were expecting a joke...or even if this were released a bit earlier on April 1st.

But still, good work all around, just make sure you check your dialogue options more in the future so you don't end up doing what you did here and linking the same line of dialog to two different options-

I really wanted to see what happened with Scooby oddly enough-

Edeshye responds:

haha, loved the review! I didn't realize there was this misdirection on that part in dialog. Will surely pay more attention next time. Thanks a lot!

[3-B]

Fluid animation. Cant wait to see what you do when you get some progress put in.

Edeshye responds:

Thanks a lot!