hey......im lost.
say wat, ur storyline barely makes much sense scince no one can hear the voices properly. graphix r a bit...m0ng0lat3d, but besides dat, it waz 'aite.
Reviews for "A lost Angel"
GREAT
and to the dude before me.i hate those types of people.so are all the writers of sad stories pussies?that dude must be the most insecure man on this planet.oh no.. better run and hide before people see me watching a sad story then people will think im not cool... idiot.great work dude.
chinees responds:
LOL, that's just a friend of mine,
IRL I'm a real ***hole, and he knows it ;)
Eric, how did you become such a pussy?
First you were all action Hank and now you've become some china who loves world and likes to tell sad stories? Remind me to whoop yo ass tomorrow :p
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
i, gues, ..............it was..........ok? i had no idea what that ninja niger was saying and therefore no fucking clue what was going on, but the music and the graphics were good, so il give u....hmm, il be generous, a 3
no0t bad
good job eric! it looks like you worked hard on this, and even though im not a huge fan of anime or ninjas, this still was very good! here are some things i think would make it better, and would better your skills as well:
work more on your anatomy, it looks like youve been practicing already. looks ok, but practice will make it look really good.
the audio levels were off. the music was louder than the dialogue. i could hardly hear what the ninja was saying.
perspective. read up on perspective and practice it!
good job, keep up the good work!