Amazing! How long have you been doing this?
You start out nicely... some good atmosphere, gah! Where'd all of that come from?! You sprung a melody on me! You could have built all of that up slower... but it's still pretty good. Nice effects there.
You know, this really reminds me of Dimrain47's stuff... I'd check out the other reviews for this song and see how many other people said the same, but I tend not to view reviews for songs I'm reviewing until I'm done reviewing the song myself, so my views aren't flawed. ;)
Your melody is creative, and catchy. It's a bit fast for humming but it's something that'd get stuck in my head all day. I hear piano now... it's a bit quiet, and doesn't shine as much as I think it could. Overall it shines, and you keep it fresh throughout the song. Sometimes it's jazzy and sometimes it's rave-hard fast.
Your harmonies are great... they (and the melody, but mostly them) are what give the song the Dimrain47 feel that I feel they have. Also I have to mention that you have what could be too many, as your quality goes down due to what I feel is an excess of them. You need work there. Otherwise a simply amazing job here.
Your percussion is weak, there are no overpowering kicks but simply a closed hat playing sixteenth notes - another characteristic both your music and Dimrain's both share.
Piano now takes the lead more than before, and it's GOOD piano! Great job here.
Your synth choice is great, but is, I feel, the cause of the lack of clarity in this song, along with harmonies. You need work there. Your effects are never too much, though.
Eew, what's that ending! The song just exploded (bad) on me. Again, clarity will add a lot to your songs done right, and will kill them done wrong.
Overall an amazing song... you deserve a lot more than what you have right now! I'll stay tuned to your music... I'll keep reviewing them as they come, assuming I remember. Why don't you stop by my music and review one of my two latest sometime? Much appreciated, and keep up the amazing work!