There should be sex scenes, not just text. The text is great tho!
Reviews for "Warrior of the North Wood v0.0.4"
one of the oldest foxs on newgrounds in a corrptuion of champions setup. its not a bad idea, i just think some of these paragraths could be fragmented up, having them all conjoined into one giant text box is a bit akward to read. spacing at 6-8 lines would make it alot easier.
Not bad for a start! The artwork is nice, the main premise is not bad, and the descriptions and detailing is not bad, though the grammar could use a little work, mostly in spacing out the text properly, else wise though the level of detailing is not half bad.
This is a solid start, and I look forward to seeing more!
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Great demo. Can not wait to see more. I really like the writing for the sex scenes. It would be much easier to read if you made the text bigger and showed less of it at once.