This song is beyond beautiful! I love hearing that drum of yours in your music, and your voice itself is such a stunning instrument! :O It takes courage to compose outside the box, and I'm glad you dared to do so. :)
Reviews for "Mio/Homura (澪/炎) EXTEND Ver."
Composition and arrangement-wise this song is phenomenal!
A good variety of melodies and chord movements keep it interesting all throughout the track.
The transitional part is probably my favourite. I felt a bit of Kingdom Hearts vibes in there, which I dig a lot. I know it can be difficult to glue together a song that comprises of multiple parts that each portray different feelings but you did it perfectly.
I still have to deduct half a point though because I think your vocals are not ideal for such a composition. The singing in the lower registers seemed a bit weak. The part at 4:22 sounded shaky at first but I really love how you ended it at 4:39 with this short rise in pitch.
I generally had the feeling that your vocals could've used a bit more processing, but that might just be my taste. However, I respect the amount of effort it must have taken you - 70 vocal tracks sounds like an awful lot.
Overall great work, with lots of great ideas and visions. Keep it up!