I love your backgrounds and animation - and the voice acting is on-point!
Keep practicing with audio ^^ I can't comment much on it since I don't know much about audio mixing, but I've heard adding minor sound effects like clothes moving when a character moves and distant (almost indecipherable) conversation to crowds like in the marketplace at the end really help bring more life to the overall scene without interfering with character dialogue.
Much appreciated, and it's all good. Seems that the audio bits are a universal thing that needs fixing, so I think that focusing more on that aspect more in post-production. The sentiments are appreciated nonetheless!
Great art as usual. I think the last time I saw an animation with pacing this slow was 4 months ago when you released episode 2. Tighten up the endless dialogue and make sure there's something interesting moving onscreen. At least one of your shots is 10 seconds of only a guy's face, no animation. You'll notice that live-action movies with long shots all have visually stimulating movement, detailed face acting, and never such long monologues.
Everything after the cut to the sky ship is littered with unexplainable pauses. Omitting them will create a drastic improvement.
Thanks for the insight! I suppose trimming things up a bit can help. I'll see what I can do about that going forward to make things more engaging.
Great animation, great voice acting, great original story, this is everything I could want in a series.
nice story keep it coming
Will do, and thank you!
Amazing!