Your sound design is really becoming more original, but I feel like this could've been so much better if you had waited for it to further flourish... and the melodies, they're rather lacking. Of course I know the focus was much more on sound design and mixing, but your old tracks had nice melodies and grooves, pushing great vibes into everyone.
It feels like partially wasted potential... and the song seems a bit short. I still loved everything you did within the song. The off-key bassy fills in the first drop add a lot, and the chords are greatly designed, albeit not all too varied. The second drop is simply lackluster and I think you tried a little too hard to make it resemble ToE2's second, too...
I hope you do better with Electrodynamix II, as it leaves much more room for creative melodies. The powerful hard-hitting chords you used in the first drop of this song would fit it quite well. I trust you'll make all the right decisions when it comes to producing it.