wow that was deep
im not sure exactly what you were aiming for, but i think it was pretty much in the range of what the affects of depression are on the human mind. I was reminded most of this by the girl thoughts, mainly of the grim reaper pushing her of the cliff, giving me the impression of thoughts of suicide. however, i sense there was something else that you were trying to portray as well. if you even look at this anymore, please give me a response and tell me what it was.
other than that, it was one of the best flashes I'd ever seen. good job and keep at it.