Interesting. Hopefully we get to see the world beyond this small kingdom at some point
Reviews for "The Universe of Lola"
Hetzliver did a pretty good job of bringing everything together. I am glad you chose him to read things over.
You should present this script as a project in the Disney, Pixar or Ghibli animation studios. You would surely receive support to turn the story into a super production with feature film trilogy :3
JUST AWESOME!!
This indeed quite well-made; I'm glad Lola & her world is building up nicely!