wonderful job!
good beginning. i like the kick and the synths in the background. The song is building up. very nice style at the fast part.
Second build up. I like your choice on the synth. It all comes together nicely. You have just the right ammount of countermelodies going on. I like your rave style on this song. I think the piano could be a little louder. The song is pretty much one tune that is built upon and added to. Nice key change. nice ending. I like how it all reverbs into the ending resolution.
I enjoy your style and listening to your music. I hope i can learn a few tips by listening to your music. I also hope that we can keep reviewing each other's music as it comes out.
Job well done,
NightHawk22