"Basshunters Tutorial Remix"
Very nice beginning. I liked the spacey synth you used, and you very beautifully melded into the kick/bassline riff with the soft melody. Since you obviously know what you are doing with trance, I'll give you one thing to work on: Make your drums more creative.
Sure, the kick/OH is a great trance thing, but when you have a drum break with your kick, do more creative things. 6/8 rolls, offbeat stabs, etc man. Be creative! Also, if you wanna fill up the background with some nice sliced up drums or something, that would just make the drums that much more ace, eh? Take a listen to DnB and Breakbeat songs to get a feel for more creative drum breaks :)
Great work, you did an awssome job. 10'd and 5'd :) Keep this up!
Could you review me and my friends track named "Vampires Dream"?
Heres a link: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1850716
See ya later!