It's great, you've got the scene done really well. It's probably one of the best single-position scenes I've seen.
If you want to improve it you could always add more positions. But more than that some sort of story or other gameplay leading to the scene is probably what it needs most.
Or you could just keeping making more one-off scenes if you prefer. It's so good it works as a standalone anyway.
Reviews for "School Ride"
I think this is fantastic! it reminds me of those old meet and fuck games from the 2000s and early 2010s. I think the animations good and the sound design is great. Also, I think adding some different positions and camera angles can really spice things up in terms of content. The amount of "toys" was alright and the fact that the girl changed how she moan was surprising since some H games use the same one over and over. With that said, the loops feel a bit short. Maybe if the audio was a bit longer or the moans were more spaced out then I think it would be an improvement. Overall, I enjoyed the 5 minutes it gave me ;)
Pretty good.
decent first attempt; keep at it
good first game just need work on the art and sounds out side of that not bad