Heyyy, not too shabby.
I liked tha animation. The sound is awesome. I love that music. Only think I suggest is that you stop moving the text when it's displayed, it's kind of annoying. Also, have the guy talk once in awhile, unless your going for the silent protagonist thing. Hope to see part 2 soon.
this is SO CLOSE to being good...
daniel, i don't mean to be discouraging, but unfortunately, you're just another example of a newgrounds artist who spends hours drawing, and minutes thinking. for example, in 1952, NO ONE payed $10,000,000 for ANYTHING. that kind of money was unheard of in 1952. i payoff of $100,000 would be more understandable. also, a dirty, unshaven 'franky' is picked up off the side of the road on past references and offered ten million dollars just like THAT? like most newgrounds artists, your time would be better spent actually RESEARCHING the mafia of the 1950's, because it was very different from what it is today... additionally, for the plot... where does franky come from? its a little bit boring to watch just another character without a personality shoot guns on newgrounds. however, i can't be all negative. you DID work very hard on the animation, and that much is evident. i've tried to use flash before, and your skills far outweigh mine. for a beginner, you're excellent, so keep improving. just make sure that you stop falling into the pitfall that most artists on newgrounds fall into... drawing without thinking.. but good work, i will definitely be looking for part two. you've established yourself well.
good
the guy that reviewed this movie was just seeking attention...trying to sound like he knows everything...HA! i think your movie was awesome, you had a different style of drawing in every scene...and that is a style in itself, which i really liked. keep up the excellent work.
Time Period Tubulance!
I know it's been said, but everything from the clothing, to the Miami scene, to the music all fits w/ the 70's/80's... GTA: Vice City took place during that 70's/80's time, and it looks like you pulled from that game for inspiration a LOT... even the opening credits were very Vice City-esq, with their bright neon pinkishness....
Nat a bad flick tho, good stuff...
Thanks, yep, I got most of my stuff from Vice City. Im a big fan. Thanks for the review.
Ok but a few things
Pretty good but there are some things you need to touch up on, like graphics. Also since when does a rocket launcher fit into a small suitcase? And when he flips onto the roof from the pipe, he doesnt even need to do it. Pretty good man, awesome job.