The changing of "how to kill"
to
"how to get rid of a mosquito"
Tells us a huge amount about the character, how they view themselves, and how they want to be viewed.
The cracked screen is also a great indicator of their level of care to the world around them.
The action was lively, and it was really impressive to hear how the music's tone and arrangement would change to match the visuals.
I also personally see it as a high mark of character design and visual choreography if the the figure can be put through dynamic animations and color changes, and can still be recognizable, so that was quite well done.
Thank you for making this.
Reviews for "MOZZIE"
HochiganMeat responds:
thanks for the detailed response, glad you liked it :)
I love it! The animation, the sounds, the music... everything! It's always good to see fun, wacky, cat-and-mouse cartoons like this. It reminds me that you don't need to write a heavy-hearted and ham-fisted cartoon (like some of Steven Universe) in order to garner massive praise; sometimes, tried-and-true formulas like this are the most genuine ways to go.
Like I said before, the music is good, but if I had to nitpick, I would've turned it down just a little. Also, I would've tried to go with a more "consistent" and "authentic" sound. Doing this, I feel like it would've sounded more like someone playing a real piano and less like someone creating a track in FL Studio with piano "keys" peaking everywhere. I also would've added more (and changed a couple of) sound effects, but that's just me.
As a side note, I thought the ending was gonna be different. The first time watching this, with the way the cartoon was going, I anticipated something horrible happening to the cat lady. I imagined her about to be swarmed and consumed by millions of mosquitoes as the lights dimmed (much like that scene from 'The Mummy' where Beni gets eaten by scarabs), only to awaken from this nightmare by a sudden cold sweat and a few relatively inconsequential (but still really annoying) bites.
In short: it's one of the most satisfying cartoons I've seen in a while. Always looking forward to more of your work!
This is a great concept executed beautifully. I'm sure that there's many people who know how this feels. Great work on the animation, it looks like it's hand-drawn so I don't expect the framerate to be amazing.
Dude great work on this! Super stylish and fun
Awesome shit man!! really well paced and I love those expressions!! Keep it up ya lil shit ;P <3