currently on rewatch number 10, and on fap number 20. everything about this one is perfect. the sound, the animation, and ah god herecomes numbers 11, 21, and 22.
Reviews for "Jackie x Janna | Bus Fuck (18+)"
This is so weirdly good.
Huh, bit longer than I thought :P
That tends to happen with your stuff though hehe. Can never be sure on how long they'll turn out.
Anyhow: Nice intro. Something feels a bit "off" with the proportions on Jackie in the first shot though. Not quite sure what, but the hips and upper body seem up to something, for lack of a better term. The transitions afterwards aren't the best. Like, how his psudo-hyper dick magically breaks through the fabric. It has quite a notable shift in style. It's not bad, just, not all that good.
I will say though: Please try to make better descriptions. It shouldn't have to be necessary to look at every single tag to figure out what it contains. Especially when it makes the title incorrect.
You can turn Jackie into a dude if you want to ofc. But I thought it was Jackie X Janna, not "Jackieboi" X Janna. It's a bit like naming something... say, "Marceline x Bubblegum" and you genderswap Marceline into Marshal Lee. (I know that's a full genderswap, but still the same point xD) Either include a like "Jackie (futa) x Janna" in the title, or just mention it somewhere when presenting it in the author comments. Being the internet: Some can get really upset if you promise lesbian stuff, then don't deliver ;P
Anyhow: Side tracking aside: Can agree that the mouths were a bit weird. But just on the "minor inconvenience" scale. They didn't distract much.
That said: The texts could do better xP Like, it was rather cringe.
Also: A shame you didn't use any of Janna's phones from the show. Would have been a nice detail. Text icons are nice though.
Face and body proportions look rather off in the grinding scene after the texts. Especially Jackieboi's face. Him and Janna looks like they're from different shows in that shot.
The voices are pretty so-so. Okay at least. I can totally underestand wanting to keep using the same VA if you got a cheap contract or similar though. Plus, it is convenient to use ones you already know :P
Genital anatomy looked fine. They both had matching detail. I mean, if we ignore the fact Jackieboi is hyper, and Janna apparently got the insides of a horse, deep as fuck and no cervix xD That is pretty classic porn logic though hehe.
I will say: The "silly face segment" was pretty hilarious xP
Hum, didn't expect the ending though. I mean, sure: He was hyper, she had a black hole. But the inflation and excessive ejaculate was a bit left field.
The overall idea was quite nice, but it all felt very disjointed. Like trying to cram too many ideas into one animation. It kinda changed what it wanted to be every 20 seconds more or less. At least that's how it felt tbh. It did keep a more comedic tone throughout however.
Still, solid work. Gonna have to dock a point (for now at least) due to the misleading title. But otherwise: This was fine.
Doing other franchises can totally be an idea as well.
I can't figure out though if Janna would be chill enough to not mind being neglected,or if she'd get ticked at that xD
HELL YES!!!
Not a big fan of the art stile but the animation was slick.