Hey!
Sup man! Ok lets see if I can still give you some good advice still.
Liked your type of style that you use alot. That being more voices in your music and your hard hitting bass lines. I kind of found it hard to understand the lyrics because of the hard distortion, so try and watch that. Don't want you botching up your WIP I cant wait for you submit or send me as final. <3 that piece of art :) For some reason which I cannot understand yet, at the near end of your song, the bassline and beat are hard to determine because of your snare (if there is one) trebble vol being too low or maybe it's how the transition of that snare flowed from one section of the song to the other. Not your best piece but I knew you worked hard to produce this and your stuff after this is even better so I gave your effort a 9 cause the way you have changed and fixed alot of your style to become more clear and unique has been very impressive! Keep in touch and dont forget to review my junk too! :)
~Red 7