Kind of different and short.
This sounded a lot different then a lot of stuff that you find on this website. I think that you need to make it about 10 to 20 seconds longer and make it loop a little bit better if your going to have it down as a loop. Other than that I can't really say what to improve on too much since the submission was so short and everything.
Overall - Make it longer and make it loop a little bit better. That should improve the score that I gave you by a couple of points.
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