Wow
Okay I applaud your way of keeping facial features such as the mouth working near perfectly to the words, also the facial expressions. You did wonderfully with most of this, but you lost it with the "call" and it went downhill. Think of more content for "news" and remove (or shorten) the caller portion. Very creative though, certainly something different! Even if this gets blammed (which I hope it doesn't) fix the things and resubmit. Also work on the sound a bit, it was a little scratchy. Rehearse your lines a bit more before recording too.