needs more
It just needs more to it. It's a good start. Hit me up at wayneyelverton@netzero.net and we can collaborate a bit. I can get some vocals kickin if you got lyrics and if not maybe I can write some. I play all instruments so a bass line and some lead guitar could be cool too. You can hear my music right here. Check my stuff out and see if we are on the same page. I don't check my stuff here very often so just write me at my e-mail.
Thank you for the great review! I love Green Machine and would love to work with you.
good but not great
i thought it was ok but not awesome the author needs to change and add notes so it isnt the same thing playign all over aain and add a singer
repetitive much...
its a great ummmmm part of the song but for a minute and a half it repeats the same thing basically then chanegs at 1:30, thats not a great song to me, it would of been a 6 but you need a singer to keep people interested when you don't change it up a lot. Granted i could be wrong and i am tired and tipsy at the moment but thats what i am hearing :)