Vicious little beat
The initial melody is what hooked me on the song, no doubt in my mind. The phrasing and keys make it seem almost oriental in tone. I love muted brake-beat drums, and more importantly, I really liked how you explored the different kinds of beats you could match to the melody and bridge.
You obviously are ProTools savvy, and I'd guess Fruity Loops too, but it's been a while, possibly too long for me to guess accurately. Nice piece, I'm highly interested to see where you go with it.