very nicely done
dude if this truly is your first flash project then you are like one of the best at it. Im gana go watch part 2 right now.
Reviews for "Overprotective"
Wtf?
Your first flash? You must be kiddin' O.o
Or is it just your first submission?
hmmm
i dont know what to say, it was ok..i really like the style of the 2nd better, the characters were drawn better.
oh and when you view the character info, you should add small pictures of them, i didnt know them by their names...
not bad
usually, these stories work better when it's an older brother overprotective of a younger sister, but I guess the awkward voice acting sorta makes the gender of the rescuees ambiguous anyways.
Fun stuff. Elementary looking, and too much text, but good premise.
-AnacondaHL
so sweet
just to attend to another matter, dont listen to that little runt RecordClock, some nooby that joins the clock crew for popularity,
ne ways i thought the flash wasnt the smoothest, but
it was amazing, the combat that fire skills the main character had, the plot, story line, events. all of those pieces come together to make a lead for a very successful series. also it your first major flash on ng, be proud u made a flash this sweet.
peace
zeon101