Not a bad visual novel layout here! The save and load buttons not really being centered on the title screen's one thing I notice, and a skip feature for dialog would be good too (not sure what the 'skip message' option on the menu really does? But otherwise controls are on point. Lots of story, effects, visuals... it's all on point. Didn't play far but unless it cuts of suddenly it seems like more than a test. Not bad.
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not bad, looking forward to seeing more of your work
I'll have to admit, this was pretty alright in my opinion. Writing is pretty eh though, but the art and the idea is good enough. Unless you're alright with having someone more skilled write the scenes, I think it'd be better to polish the writing and have some people give feedback on it. Art is great as usual, and although the sudden change in content, I believe this has more potential. Don't pay too much attention to the homophobes, and keep up the good work!
Notbad
A fun experience here and while it is just a test I still found it to be fun, you have some nice ideas here with this game and your visuals and graphics are nice would have been nice if there was some music and or sound f/x but overall it is just a test.
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would have been nice if there was some music and or sound f/x
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Boku no hetero